Make it shorter, make it better
Before Breakfast
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🗓️ 27 September 2023
⏱️ 6 minutes
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Most writing improves when you cut unneeded words
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| 0:00.0 | Everyone in our country has a voice. It's something that says not just where you come from, |
| 0:04.8 | but who you are. Welcome to NPR's Black Stories Black Truths, a collection of podcasts and |
| 0:11.2 | a celebration of the hosts and journalism who've always spoken truth to power. |
| 0:16.0 | Our voices are as varied, nuanced, and dynamic as the Black experience, and stories should never |
| 0:21.6 | be about us without us. Find NPR Black Stories Black Truths on the iHeartRadio app or wherever you |
| 0:28.7 | get your podcasts. Welcome to Before Breakfast, a production of iHeartRadio. |
| 0:39.6 | Good morning. This is Laura. Welcome to the Before Breakfast Podcast. |
| 0:46.8 | Today's tip is that when you're writing, making something shorter almost always makes it better. |
| 0:55.0 | So give your writing a haircut, and your readers will be happier to read what you wrote. |
| 1:02.3 | This week I'm sharing some of my favorite writing tips. Even if you don't write for a living, |
| 1:08.4 | you might need to write reports or emails or articles for industry publications. |
| 1:14.5 | A few strategies can help anyone create writing that is more compelling and clear. |
| 1:20.1 | So my first professional writing gigs were for USA Today and Readers Digest, |
| 1:26.8 | which are two publications known for brevity. Paper publications always have limited space, |
| 1:34.4 | and so whatever I wrote the first time would almost always need to become shorter to make it onto |
| 1:40.9 | the page. This was sometimes frustrating and it doesn't work to turn a 1,000 word article |
| 1:48.0 | into a 500 word article. You need a different sized thesis for those two links. |
| 1:55.6 | That said, turning a 1,000 word article into a 900 word article is not only possible, |
| 2:03.3 | it will likely improve things. Here's how. You will immediately hunt for extraneous phrases. |
| 2:11.9 | We all have these throat clearing sets of words that we throw in without thinking about it. |
| 2:17.4 | If you are aiming to cut 10 to 15%, those will go fast. |
| 2:23.6 | You'll also look for more comprehensive words. Walked slowly, might become ambled, ran really |
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