Okay in my never ending quest to do something new.

I'm gonna do something I've never done before.

I'm gonna read the same story that I received from a real person twice.

The first version you're going to get is exactly what I got in the email.

And the second version is going to be how Neoma edited it.

Now, I'm not doing this to make fun of this rider at all.

You know, we all have gifts. Some people have the gift of, you know, academics and some people

are great with their hands. They're good wrenching on engines. Some guys are good welders. Some people are great. good we're

welders some people are great with numbers and their

accountants and their engineers and some of those people maybe don't have a real good feel for how a story can flow, you know, a good way to make a story flow.

So this in no way is to poke fun. You're not going to know his name so he's not going to be embarrassed and if he hears this

I don't remember when I got this but I think man I just don't know when I got it but I'm going to show I'm going to you're going to hear two stories and I'm going to show you what we do to them

The first thing you need to know is we do not change what happens in the story.

We just make the story better.

We just make it told better.

And you're going to see what I'm talking about and if you're smart

if you're not one of these crazy Bigfoot extremist enthusiasts who have been sending me emails lately about me changing stories. I don't change any stories. I just make them better. I make them flow so that you guys can enjoy them.

So I want you to tell me in the comment section which story that I'm about to read

that you enjoyed better and you're going to see that nothing

changes in the story. Everything is exactly the way he said it. It's just told in a different way because that's what we do. We try to give you good quality

readings so that you can enjoy the story.

So enough talking.

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