67: How to Be Concise, with Bonni Stachowiak
Coaching for Leaders
Dave Stachowiak
4.8 • 1.6K Ratings
🗓️ 10 December 2012
⏱️ 21 minutes
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Summary
Bonni Stachowiak: Teaching in Higher Ed
Bonni is the host of the Teaching in Higher Ed podcast, Dean of Teaching and Learning and Professor of Business and Management at Vanguard University, and my life partner. Prior to her academic career, she was a human resources consultant and executive officer for a publicly traded company. Bonni is the author of The Productive Online and Offline Professor: A Practical Guide*.
All of us are being bombarded by so much information and data that we can barely keep up. If we want to be able to influence more effectively, we need to be able to do it concisely. Bonni and I discuss strategies for making this happen.
Mark Twain received the following telegram from a publisher:
NEED 2-PAGE SHORT STORY TWO DAYS.
And famously replied…
NO CAN DO 2 PAGES TWO DAYS. CAN DO 30 PAGES 2 DAYS. NEED 30 DAYS TO DO 2 PAGES.
In his book Information Anxiety, Richard Saul Wurman states that a standard issue of the New York Times contains more information than a citizen of 17th England would have absorbed in their entire lifetime.
The problem?
- Many people will tune us out when we are not concise.
- People stop taking calls or are often “unavailable” from people who can’t be concise.
- Lots of people will stop seeking advice from someone who can’t give it concisely.
- We don’t have credibility with most audiences if we can’t communicate what we know concisely.
What are the causes?
- For many of my clients, their technical training works against them in communicating concisely.
- People believe (falsely) that they are more credible the longer they speak. Not true…it’s about quality, not quantity.
- The “PowerPoint culture” in many organizations has reinforced the myth that more information in slides is better when presentation information. Most of the time, it’s not – less is more.
- Since making something concise takes time and investment, some of us simply just don’t want to do it out of laziness…even when we know it would help the audience.
- Selfishness sometimes creeps in – we like to hear ourselves talk and we forget that our purpose is to add value for the audience, not to look good ourselves.
What are the solutions?
- Ask yourself if what you are about the communicate is really essential to the overall message?
- If you put yourself in the audience’s shows, would you really care about what it is you are about to say?
- Have someone you trust who knows your audience listen to what you are going to say before you get in front of your manager, a meeting, or a large presentation.
- Budget time to edit down what you are saying to make it more concise.
Suggestions for implementation:
- Have firm standards on your conciseness and stick to them…
- As an example, this show is almost always 40 minutes or less.
- My weekly articles are 500 words or less
- Join Toastmasters and get practice speaking concisely
- Attend the Dale Carnegie Course and learn and use many models to get ideas across quickly.
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| 0:00.0 | You're listening to coaching for leaders. This is episode number 67. This week's topic, How to Be Concise. |
| 0:08.0 | Produced by Innovate Learning, Maximizing Human Potential. learning, maximizing human potential. |
| 0:13.0 | Welcome to coaching for leaders. |
| 0:19.0 | This is the show for leaders who want to improve themselves |
| 0:22.0 | so they can better engage and develop others. |
| 0:26.1 | Whether you're a season leader or leading people for the first time, improving your leadership |
| 0:30.8 | skills will drive your success, and most importantly the success of others. |
| 0:36.0 | This week's topic is how to be concise. |
| 0:40.0 | Well welcome back for another episode of Coaching for Leaders. My name is Dave Stahoviac. |
| 0:47.9 | I am joined here in studio by Bonnie Stahoviac. Hello, Bonnie. |
| 0:51.1 | Hello, Dave. And we are back for this week's topic, |
| 0:54.8 | how to be concise, which I have a feeling will be a fairly short show. |
| 1:00.0 | Ha ha. |
| 1:01.0 | Little podcast humor there. Ha ha. Little podcast humor there. |
| 1:03.0 | Ha ha. |
| 1:05.0 | No way is laughing. |
| 1:06.0 | People all over the place are hitting delete on their phones right now and saying, wait till next week. |
| 1:11.0 | The humor is bad. |
| 1:12.0 | Glad to have you back for another episode though. |
| 1:15.0 | And seriously though, this is a really important topic and one that a lot of my clients struggle with. and I know you've seen a lot of people struggle with too Bonnie. |
| 1:25.6 | Yeah, I don't think that we're trained very well how to be concise. |
| 1:29.6 | You know, I think about myself as a university professor that you know we're constantly assigning things like a word |
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