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Fiction Writing Made Easy with Savannah Gilbo | How to Write a Novel & Writing Advice

#61: First Chapter Analysis: Harry Potter & the Prisoner of Azkaban with Abigail Perry

Fiction Writing Made Easy with Savannah Gilbo | How to Write a Novel & Writing Advice

Savannah Gilbo

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🗓️ 19 July 2022

⏱️ 50 minutes

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In this episode, we're taking a deep dive into the first chapter of Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaban by J.K. Rowling. Join me and fellow developmental editor, Abigail Perry, as we nerd out about the third book in the Harry Potter series: [03:00] A very quick summary of the first chapter [04:50] A macro analysis of the first chapter using 7 key questions from Paula Munier's book The Writer’s Guide to Beginnings [21:00] A micro analysis of the two scenes within the chapter using the "...

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0:54.3

Harry going to Hogsmeade is going to put him in danger. This scene, Harry is relatively safe as

1:00.7

safe as Harry can be with Voldemort on the loose, and it just moves him slightly closer to danger

1:05.6

because it's opening the door to Hogsmeade. I love that you're going here. This is literally

1:10.8

what I was talking with a client the other day, and when the character doesn't know the main

1:16.1

threat, how do you get the main threat in there? Well, that's why it's so important that the

1:21.2

author knows, right? Because then the author has opportunities to throw red herrings to throw

1:25.6

false breadcrumbs, add them, and turn them this way in that way, which creates setups for bot twist.

1:31.8

Welcome to the Fiction Writing Made Easy Podcast. My name is savannagilbo, and I'm here to

1:36.7

help you write the story that works. I want to prove to you that writing a novel doesn't have to

1:41.2

be overwhelming. So each week, I'll bring you a brand new episode with simple, actionable,

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