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Fiction Writing Made Easy with Savannah Gilbo | How to Write a Novel & Writing Advice

#253. 5 Common Mistakes That Make Your Character Feel Flat

Fiction Writing Made Easy with Savannah Gilbo | How to Write a Novel & Writing Advice

Savannah Gilbo

Story Structure, Story Development, Character Development, Arts, Plotting A Novel, Fiction, World Building, Books, Fiction Writing Tips, Education, Writing Stronger Scenes, Fiction Writing Mistakes To Avoid, How To, Editing A Novel, Writing Advice, How To Outline A Novel, Character Arcs

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🗓️ 23 June 2026

⏱️ 24 minutes

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Summary

If your protagonist feels vivid in your head but flat on the page, this episode will help you diagnose what’s missing—and fix the specific piece of character development that will make readers care. You know your main character. Their backstory, their childhood, the exact way they take their coffee. You could talk about them for an hour. So why do they still feel flat on the page? When this happens, most writers assume they need to know more—a deeper backstory, more personality details, anoth...

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0:00.0

You know your main character inside and out, you know their backstory, their childhood, their fears, their quirks, and maybe even how they take their coffee.

0:07.9

And yet somehow, when they hit the page, whether that's in your outline or your first draft, they still feel kind of flat.

0:14.1

So maybe you do what most writers do and you add more, more backstory, more personality, and more detail.

0:20.4

Or maybe you just focus on making

0:22.1

them more likable. But either way, none of it really solves the problem. Well, in this

0:26.8

episode, I'm going to show you why that happens, and I'm going to help you figure out which

0:30.7

specific piece of character development is actually missing, also that you can strengthen the

0:35.9

character you already have instead of piling

0:38.0

on more details or scrapping your draft.

0:43.1

Welcome to the Fiction Writing Made Easy podcast. My name is Savannah Gilbo, and I'm here to help

0:48.3

you write a story that works. I want to prove to you that writing a novel doesn't have to be

0:52.5

overwhelming. So each week,

0:54.3

I'll bring you a brand new episode with simple, actionable, and step-by-step strategies that you can

0:59.4

implement in your writing right away. So whether you're brand new to writing or more of a seasoned

1:03.8

author looking to improve your craft, this podcast is for you. So pick up a pen and let's get

1:08.8

started. So today we're talking about what to do when your

1:14.0

protagonist feels flat on the page, even if you feel like you know them really well. And this is

1:19.7

such a common problem because most writers assume that flatness means they need more character

1:25.4

information, more backstory, more quirks, more personality,

1:29.6

or even more likability. But in my experience, that's usually not the real issue. The problem is

1:36.1

usually that one of the key pieces that helps the character function inside your story is

1:41.2

either missing, vague, or underdeveloped. So in this episode, I'm going to walk you

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