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Grammar Girl Quick and Dirty Tips for Better Writing

220 How to Eliminate Adverbs

Grammar Girl Quick and Dirty Tips for Better Writing

Mignon Fogarty, Inc.

Society & Culture, Education

4.52.9K Ratings

🗓️ 29 April 2010

⏱️ 5 minutes

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How to Eliminate Adverbs

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0:00.0

Grammar girl here, today Bonnie Trango will help us decide whether adverbs are useful or

0:10.3

evil.

0:11.8

No one likes feeling useless, but adverbs might justifiably feel that way.

0:17.2

Adverbs find themselves much maligned because they're often redundant or awkwardly placed.

0:22.8

Master writer Stephen King complains about them in his book on writing, saying, quote,

0:28.0

I believe the road to hell is paved with adverbs and I'll shout it from the rooftops

0:32.8

and quote.

0:34.2

But he doesn't shout it loudly.

0:36.3

He likens adverbs to dandelions.

0:38.8

When one unwanted weed sprouts up, more follow.

0:42.8

It's not that I don't like adverbs.

0:44.8

They modify verbs, adjectives, other adverbs in whole sentences, sometimes smashingly so.

0:51.2

Let's see some examples.

0:52.8

The adverb quickly could modify the verb to run, as in a tiger run quickly.

0:58.8

The adverb overly could modify the adjective sensitive if you wanted to describe an overly

1:04.3

sensitive young man.

1:06.7

If you wanted to criticize someone's cooking and use an adverb to modify your entire complaint,

1:12.9

you may say, clearly you didn't read the recipe.

1:17.0

So adverbs have their place, but often writers can improve their writing by pruning adverbs.

1:23.3

Let's quickly deal with adverbs you can easily cut, repetitive adverbs.

1:28.9

You could, for example, write, she smiled happily, but that would be redundant and no one

1:34.3

would smile happily while reading your uncarefully crafted sentence, frowned morosely, and jumped

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