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The Shit No One Tells You About Writing
Bianca Marais, Carly Watters and CeCe Lyra
4.8 • 733 Ratings
🗓️ 3 August 2023
⏱️ 69 minutes
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Summary
In today’s episode, Byron Lane joins Bianca, Carly, and CeCe to critique Books with Hooks submissions while also talking about Big Gay Wedding.
During the episode, they discuss a character’s why’s; being too on the nose/predictable with plot points; the use of a foreign language; the element of surprise; weaving humour into the story; prologues that have got to go; moving between different POVs (i.e., third-person close and omniscient); choosing the biggest sucker punch POV for each scene; literary devices; jolting the main character into action; writing competitive pages; heightening conflict; and challenges between first and second books.
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Transcript
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| 0:00.0 | Hi there and welcome to our show. |
| 0:09.1 | The shit no one tells you about writing. |
| 0:12.0 | I'm Bianca Murray and I'm joined by Carly Waters and Cici Lira from PS Literary Agency. |
| 0:19.6 | It's a new year and time to get fresh eyes on your work in progress. |
| 0:24.1 | Are you looking for beta readers, some of whom might potentially become writing group members down |
| 0:28.9 | the line? Are you wanting to be matched up with those writing in a similar genre and or time |
| 0:34.4 | zone so they can critique your work as you critique theirs at the same time. |
| 0:38.8 | Your manuscript doesn't have to be complete to sign up for this 3,000 word evaluation. |
| 0:44.2 | This matchup will be open to registrations from now until the 2nd of March |
| 0:48.7 | with the matchup emails going out on the 3rd of March. |
| 0:52.5 | Always such an exciting day. |
| 0:54.9 | For more information and to register, |
| 0:57.0 | go to Bianca Moray.com and go to the beta reader matchup tab. |
| 1:01.1 | And please spread the word, |
| 1:03.0 | even if you aren't joining the matchup this time. |
| 1:05.6 | The more writers we have signed up, |
| 1:08.1 | the better the matches will be. |
| 1:10.5 | Hello from CeC. |
| 1:11.8 | I'm so excited to announce an all-new class called Starting It Right, |
| 1:16.3 | which is all about how to begin your story in the best place and in the best way. |
| 1:20.8 | Now, this is going to be a four-day class, so come prepared to take lots of notes. |
| 1:25.3 | We'll cover the different types of beginnings and how to choose |
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