Hello and welcome to the Storygrid podcast. My name is Tim Graal. I'm the CEO of Storygrid,

and I'm also a struggling writer trying to figure out how to tell a story that works. I'm the host of

the show. Joining me shortly is Sean Coyne. He's the creator and founder of StoryGrid, and he's a writer

and editor with over 30 years of experience. Along with him is Leslie

Watts, editor-in-chief of Storygrid Publishing and Daniel Kiyoski, the chief academic officer

of Story Grid University. So last week, I was given the homework to continue working on my draft

based on the short story eyewitness by Ed McBain.

So we've been working on this for a while now.

And we rejiggered the way that we're doing this to try to make it much easier for me to

understand what they're asking me to do and get really, really specific with the next steps.

So I was given the homework of working on the

narrator, on Watson and the character. So I was given the homework of focusing on the narrator,

the character Watson in my short story, and really nailing him and getting him right. So I get

the feedback on that, and then we move on to looking at the protagonist.

And what I like about this is a lot of what we talk about is what it means to tell the truth

and a story and how telling the truth in the correct way can make your protagonists, make your

characters believable and how this can change based on your character and the point

of view and the narrator and all of these things and how they all work together. Now I'm writing fiction,

so what is the truth, right? And it's really interesting to dive into this question and think about

this question and how this applies to how the reader is going

to experience our characters. So it's a really important episode. I think you're going to enjoy it.

So let's jump in and get started. So Tim, last week we asked you to go back through your draft,

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