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This is episode 878 and today I am going to be sharing with you two live email writing examples but also live reviews and one email I completely rewrote and it was an email that was

trying to sell something. Now it's a very common mistake for people to write a sales email like a straight up sales email.

And we don't really want to do that.

And we also can write it in a way that actually sounds more personal without it being so, you know, business or corporatee,

because that's what it actually looked like.

So I actually took this email,

and this was the second email that I reviewed,

and I am going to show you how I took what he wrote

and rewrote the thing as if I was selling this product.

And you're gonna see very, very simple way of writing an email.

There is a little bit of an art that happens

when you write these email that you have to understand,

but it doesn't have to be hard and

that's why I'm doing this here I've done a few in the past I'm gonna do more of these

because I think they're very helpful for you to see like as you're kind of looking over my shoulder as if I

was to write this email or rewrite this email. So there's two emails that you're

going to be actually going through here with me. Now this was again during one of our coffee talks.

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