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Helping Writers Become Authors

Ep. 238: Get Rid of On-the-Nose Dialogue Once and For All

Helping Writers Become Authors

K.M. Weiland

Arts

4.81.1K Ratings

🗓️ 18 January 2015

⏱️ 11 minutes

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Summary

If you can identify on-the-nose dialogue and learn how to replace it with rich undercurrents of subtext, you're on your way to becoming a master author.

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0:00.0

This is K.M. Wyland and you are listening to the my work. But my goal this year is to slow down a little bit and take some extra time on a routine

0:26.6

basis to smell the roses and refill my inspiration tank. I'm planning to dedicate one full day a week just a fiction and take another

0:35.6

day away from business stuff to focus on odds and ends like grocery shopping, studying foreign

0:41.5

languages just for fun, enjoying the outdoors, and just dream zoning.

0:47.0

I'm not big on New Year's goals since I believe goals should be implemented whenever they become necessary, but I do love how the turn of the year

0:56.0

always seems to inspire us to re-evaluate our lives and make adjustments as necessary.

1:02.0

So here's to a 2015 full of novel writing and dream zoning

1:07.1

as well as you know all that fun blogging

1:09.7

podcasting and vlogging stuff.

1:14.1

The latest post in the video series on my blog is I just figured out what all my favorite stories

1:19.4

have in common and it blew my mind. It talks about the secret ingredient that can take even

1:26.3

mediocre ideas and turn them into your reader's favorite five-star stories.

1:31.5

To find the post, visit my site at helping writers become

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authors.com. And now I hope you enjoyed this week's podcast entitled

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Get Rid of on-the-nose dialogue once and for all. and writers, subtlety, and subtext. This is true in absolutely every area of storytelling,

1:57.7

from narrative to plotting to character development, but the lack of subtlety and subtext is perhaps nowhere more obvious

2:07.0

than in dialogue. I'm talking, of course, about on-the-nose dialogue.

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When I pick up a potential read and skim through its opening paragraphs to discover

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whether or not the book will peak my interest,

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one of the first things I look at is the dialogue.

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If it's on the nose, I'm out of there. Why? Because if the author is

2:28.8

giving me on the nose dialogue, then it's a sure bet he's not going to be able to give me the other subtleties

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