626 - Realistic but Distracting
Scriptnotes Podcast
John August
4.8 • 2.8K Ratings
🗓️ 16 January 2024
⏱️ 56 minutes
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Summary
John and Craig investigate those details that are accurate and authentic, but can pull viewers out of the story. They look for ways to balance what is realistic with what is believable, and how to get rid of distractions and keep your audience focused on what matters.
We also discuss popular names, follow up on Icelandic pronunciations and the Mazinga toy, and answer listener questions on period details, defining biopics, writing during production, and whether or not to read the script before watching the movie.
In our bonus segment for premium members, John and Craig swallow their pride and ask, how can you tell when someone is just being nice?
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| 0:00.0 | Hello and welcome my name is John August my name is Craig Mason and is |
| 0:06.4 | episode 626 of script notes a podcast about screenwriting and things that are |
| 0:10.3 | interesting to screenwriters today on the, what do you do when reality is |
| 0:14.4 | distracting? As writers we aim for accuracy and specificity which generally helps |
| 0:18.9 | stories feel authentic, but those very qualities can sometimes paradoxically pull viewers out of the story |
| 0:24.2 | while trying to find the middle ground. |
| 0:26.2 | We'll also answer some questions about writing during production, period details, |
| 0:30.9 | and whether or not to read the script before watching the movie. |
| 0:34.0 | Oh, well, there's an answer to that one. |
| 0:36.0 | Yeah. |
| 0:37.0 | What's your answer? |
| 0:38.0 | No. |
| 0:39.0 | I think you often should. |
| 0:40.0 | So we'll discuss it before you watch the movie? |
| 0:42.0 | Yeah. I think as a person who wants to learn about writing the craft. |
| 0:46.0 | Oh, that. |
| 0:47.0 | Oh, I thought you meant just as a person that was watching a movie, you know the way we would hope that they would watch it without knowing what's happening. |
| 0:54.3 | Yeah, yeah, we'll dig into that. |
| 0:57.2 | Okay. |
| 0:58.2 | And in a bonus segment for premium members, how can you tell when someone is just being nice? |
| 1:01.6 | We'll discuss techniques for differentiating actual interest when it's just being nice. We'll discuss techniques for differentiating actual |
| 1:03.7 | interest when it comes to scripts and in real life. Oh, well give away all my secrets. |
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