20.30: Using Why To Shape Tone

Writing Excuses

Mary Robinette Kowal, DongWon Song, Erin Roberts, Dan Wells, and Howard Tayler

Fiction, Business, Careers

4.7 • 1.3K Ratings

🗓️ 27 July 2025

⏱️ 22 minutes

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Summary

Tone is one of those words people use in many different ways when talking about fiction. On today’s episode, our hosts break down what it means, how we use it, and how it can be a tool in the writer’s toolbox. We dive into the myriad emotional shades of tone, and how you can use this to deepen your story’s themes.

Homework: Write a vignette in which one of your characters is pouring tea for a beloved partner. First, try for a joyful tone. Then, write it again but with a tone of terror.

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Credits: Your hosts for this episode were Mary Robinette Kowal, Dan Wells, and Howard Tayler. It was produced by Emma Reynolds, recorded by Marshall Carr, Jr., and mastered by Alex Jackson.

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1:15.2	Season 20, episode 30,
1:18.7	this is writing excuses.
1:22.3	Using Y to shape tone.
1:24.9	I'm Howard.
1:25.7	I'm Mary Robinette.
1:26.8	And I'm Dan. Today we're going to be talking about tone. Now, I. I'm Mary Robinette. And I'm Dan.
1:28.3	Today we're going to be talking about tone.
1:30.2	Now, I know that we did a whole episode in season 18 on tone and mood.
1:37.7	We're coming back to tone because I love talking about it.
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