Hey there, Savannah here. Before we get into today's episode, I wanted to share our next book

pick with you because I'm super excited to dig into this book and see how and why it works.

Our next meeting is coming up on November 16th at 4 p.m. Pacific, 7 p.m. Eastern, and we're going to be

digging into the fourth wing by Rebecca Yarrows.

Abigail and I are so excited to deconstruct this book and these meetings are always so much fun.

They're interactive so in addition to our presentation on why we think this story works

and why we think it resonates with readers, there are also polls and lots of opportunities to chat with other

writers and ask us questions and you know just participate in a group discussion

about a really awesome book. As always our aim is to analyze a novel and translate our learnings into

actionable tips, tools, and strategies that you can take and implement in your own

writing right away. So if you want to join us or if you want to learn more about how the book club works, go to

Savannah Gilboe.com forward slash book dash club. One more time that's Savannah

Gilboe.com forward slash book dash club hope to see you there and that's because there's no

quicker way to stall the forward momentum of your story than to have your main

character waffle back and forth between two love interests for too long yes, your main character should have a hard time

choosing between both potential partners,

but if you drag this decision on too long,

then you're probably going to annoy your readers

and make them lose interest in what's happening in your story.

Welcome to the Fiction Writing Made Easy podcast. My name is Savannah Gilboo and I'm here to help you write a story that works.

I want to prove to you that writing a novel doesn't have to be overwhelming. So each week I'll bring you a

brand new episode with simple, actionable, and step-by-step strategies that you can implement in your writing right away.

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