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Helping Writers Become Authors

10 Stylistic Mistakes Sabotaging Your Story

Helping Writers Become Authors

K.M. Weiland

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4.81.1K Ratings

🗓️ 14 August 2011

⏱️ 4 minutes

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0:00.0

This is K.M. Wyland.

0:07.0

This is K.M. Wyland and you are listening to the 110th episode of the Word Play Podcast.

0:13.0

Brighters have to be flexible.

0:15.0

The one sure thing about writing is that nothing ever turns out exactly as you think it was.

0:20.0

I was pretty darn positive that I was going to be able to stand finished on my first draft of the deepest breath this week.

0:26.5

I wrote the final chapter and had my fingers hovering over the keyboard ready to type the end,

0:31.5

but I could just tell something wasn't quite right.

0:35.0

I always know when a story is wrong.

0:37.0

I don't always know when it's right, but I always have a dark, twitchie, not quite right feeling when something's amiss.

0:43.2

I had that feeling about my final chapter.

0:45.8

It's a chapter I'd been planning since early in the outlining stages, but now that I'd

0:50.4

actually written it, I could tell it was all wrong.

0:53.4

There's probably no part of a story more difficult to Chuck than the final chapter.

0:58.2

You want so bad to be finished so you can print off that proud finished product and start polishing.

1:04.6

But chakit I did.

1:05.8

I hit the brainstorming barn again, figured out my problem, and sketched a quick outline for

1:10.4

a new scene.

1:11.4

I haven't had a chance to write it yet, but I've got my fingers

1:14.2

cross that this one will do the trick. Is your character a win bag? The latest post in the video

1:21.0

series on my blog explains why lengthy sections of unbroken dialogue

1:25.5

make your character's speech less realistic and more boring.

1:29.8

You can watch the video on my blog and Wordplay dash k-m-Yland that's W-E-I-L-A-N-D dot blog spot

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