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Writing Excuses

19.38: A Close Reading on Tension: Anticipation and Subversion

Writing Excuses

Mary Robinette Kowal, DongWon Song, Erin Roberts, Dan Wells, and Howard Tayler

Fiction, Business, Careers

4.71.3K Ratings

🗓️ 22 September 2024

⏱️ 21 minutes

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Summary

When you’re subverting your readers’ expectations, do you need to do the exact opposite of what they’re anticipating? Today, we dive into this question, using various examples of books and movies. We then examine how P. Djèlí Clark does this throughout Ring Shout– does he subvert our expectations completely? Not always. In fact, sometimes he does the opposite.


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Credits: Your hosts for this episode were Mary Robinette Kowal, DongWon Song, Erin Roberts, and Howard Tayler. It was produced by Emma Reynolds, recorded by Marshall Carr, Jr., and mastered by Alex Jackson.

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Season 19 episode 38.

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This is writing excuses.

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A close reading on tension, anticipation, and subversion.

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15 minutes long because you're in a hurry.

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And we're not that smart.

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I'm Mary Robinette.

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I'm Don Juan.

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I'm Aaron. I'm Mary Robinette. I'm Donne one. I'm Aaron. I'm Howard.

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One of my favorite forms of tension is the thing where you set something up for the

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reader and then you send it off in a completely different direction that they expect.

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And it's something that P. Jelly Clark does again and again in Ring Shout.

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An example from a different property is one that Dong One mentioned earlier in this series when they were talking about the in the

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Candy Land remake with the opening the door the long set of stairs looking down it and going nope.

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Like we are anticipating that and that just subverts it.

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It just was like nope we're gonna do the exact opposite we're going to do the exact opposite.

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We're going to go a completely different way than you're expected.

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So when we're playing with anticipation and subversion,

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is it necessary to always go in the exact opposite direction when you're subverting or are there other options?

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Yeah, I feel like there's so many ways to subvert, right? There's the complete inversion, right? But then you can also just sort of sometimes make a lateral move, right? Like the nope example is the complete

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