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Fiction Writing Made Easy

#127: First Chapter Analysis: The Five People You Meet In Heaven by Mitch Albom

Fiction Writing Made Easy

Savannah Gilbo

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4.91.5K Ratings

🗓️ 30 January 2024

⏱️ 60 minutes

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Summary

“It might seem strange to start a story with an ending, but all endings are also beginnings. We just don't know it at the time.” - Abigail K. Perry

In this episode, we’re talking about The Five People You Meet In Heaven by Mitch Albom to see how and why it works. Join Abigail K. Perry and me as we break down this first chapter to see how it hooks our interest and pulls us into the story. Here's a preview of what's included:

[02:40] Chapter summary: Abigail reads a summary of the first chapter and talks about how (and why) the author gives away the ending of the story upfront.

[15:52] Macro analysis: We talk through the 7 Key Questions as laid out by Paula Munier in her book, The Writer's Guide to Beginnings, and how the chapter serves as a compelling opening for a character-driven story.

[21:42] Abigail talks about how this story is a great example of a novel with a unique voice.

[45:46] Micro analysis: We talk through the structure of the scene using the 5 Commandment scene framework as laid out by Shawn Coyne at The Story Grid, including the use of “postcard scenes”—a term they borrowed from Donald Maass.

[58:30] Final thoughts: The first chapter is essential in driving the story forward so writers should ensure that they are delivering enough of the big picture to engage readers.

Click here to check out the LitMatch Podcast with Abigail Perry! You can also get in touch with Abigail through her website or on Instagram @abigailkperry.

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0:00.0

for me when I read this first chapter how I feel is well I mean this is kind of a silly

0:06.0

worry about I just feel emotional I feel emotional yeah I have big feelings I think

0:11.2

that that longing that terror of wanting to add value to life and also I think even if you haven't been at some place in your life to feel this way but feeling like you can reach a place of just

0:24.6

exhaustion and acceptance of what your role is.

0:30.3

Welcome to the Fiction Writing Made easy podcast. My name is Savannah Gilboe and I'm here to help you write a story that works.

0:38.0

I want to prove to you that writing a novel doesn't have to be overwhelming.

0:42.0

So each week I'll bring you a

0:43.4

brand new episode with simple, actionable, and step-by-step strategies that you can

0:48.1

implement in your writing right away. So whether you're brand new to writing or

0:51.6

more of a seasoned author looking to improve your craft, this podcast is for you.

0:55.6

So pick up a pen and let's get started.

1:00.5

Hey Savannah, thanks so much for analyzing the five people you meet in heaven with me.

1:06.5

I'm really excited to dig into this one.

1:09.3

This book is one of my favorites from when I was younger.

1:13.4

I don't know when it was published now.

1:16.7

I'm trying to find the exact copyright date,

1:19.5

but I know it's a much older one,

1:21.2

one of Michablam's, you know, one of his earlier books his first book was actually I believe

1:26.4

Tuesdays with Morrie which was a memoir and this is his first fiction book but I've been a big

1:31.7

fan of my job,

1:33.0

since I was little, and this book in particular,

1:36.6

so now it'll be fun to analyze it with a deep lens.

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